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Some people think technology is now an invaluable study tool for young people. Others, however, believe that it is harmful to the studying process.

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When it comes to education there are several controversial topics,
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 whether
technology
 should be used as a study tool for young
people
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technology
 is an important study tool, mainly because it became
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 irreplaceable piece of our professional and daily lives.
Additionally
, those
people
 believe that it accelerates the learning process given that it stimulates different parts of the brain
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 a very effective way.
However
, there is another group of
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 it to be harmful. They believe that
technology
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 for young
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 not built their critical thinking. Those distractions could come from the superficial internet content or the wild range of information sources that are not always trustable. On top of that, there are recent studies that
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 a possible
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addictive
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 effect of
technology
 on children and teenagers. In my
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,
although
 both sides have valuable arguments, it is important to take advantage of the good things that
technology
 can add to the education process and I believe it is possible to prevent , or at least reduce, the harmful effects by blocking
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 internet content and getting adult supervision. In conclusion, I believe that everything
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discomfort
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 traditionally driven
people
, but it is important to keep an open mind for all the developments that our society goes through. For me, the best way to improve our methods is to
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 the status quo, so I am in
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 of using
technology
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