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You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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Dear Mr Grey, I am penning
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 letter to inform you that I will not be able to continue the Digital marketing course which I joined
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 month at your institute. As discussed before, I am currently working full-time with Amazon and
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 course is highly beneficial for me and can aid me
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higher position. Let me explain the situation, I enrolled for
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 class because I was able to manage my work and lectures effectively,
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, now my firm has got a new project and my manager has decided that
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 and my teammates require to deliver some seminars about the new products in Sydney.
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, I have to stay there for a month which would be very challenging for me to pursue the course. I request you hold my admission for one month and I can resume after coming back or ,
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 you can register me for the
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 semester. It is
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 request that you can consider my situation and not cancel my admission. Waiting for your reply. Yours Sincerely, Sonali Dhir
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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