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Is technology limiting creativity? Discuss your opinion

#technology #creativity
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. Today we have a comfortable and easier life because of
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 is taking over our jobs and
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 making us lazy. Since all our work is done by
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, it is limiting our creativity. People do not want to work hard because all their work turned easier due to
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. I believe that if people have to do these things themselves because
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 they will rely on it. On the
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 hand,
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 of the main advantages of automation is that it helps you save time since using various devices, simple tasks may be completed in minutes rather than hours.
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 wholly mankind utilises modern machines due to it alleviates their employment. At the touch of a switch, a man can witness any event
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 happening in far-off places.
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, the more
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 grows, the more opportunities are given to fulfil our creative ambitions in
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 field.
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,some experts say that everything done by robots will definitely harm humans because when robots do everything, there will be no jobs left for humans to do, and
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, it will be harmful to human health.
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, if a person sits in
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 place without moving and relies on robots, they may develop diseases of being overweight and laziness. We are unable to think of anything without our smartphones since we are so dependent on them. In conclusion, From my point of view, everyone is good at heart because if people are not always on the move they are lazy so they should not stop thinking. I continue to believe that advanced
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 gives us a greater capacity for creativity
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