Some people think that robots are very important to human's future development, while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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cause
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Personally
I agree more Add a comma
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with
that robots are more on the side of liberating humanity from monotonous jobs and unleashing our creativity。
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，it is obvious that the vision of the modern world where Linking Words
human
play Fix the agreement mistake
humans
a
important role of the creators，and artificial intelligence will construct machines to implement these creations.One of the benefits Change the article
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that
robots free workers from repetitive and tedious Add a missing verb
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job
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creativity
work and innovation.Especially in Replace the word
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industry
where Add an article
an industry
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the robot
a robot
robot
can replace a number of Fix the agreement mistake
robots
people
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people
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the
productivity and increase efficiency.Correct article usage
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robot
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robots
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people
improve their Use synonyms
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lifestyle
life style
.
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robot
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robots
for
our daily life.Change preposition
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robots
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robots'
robot's
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approaches
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that often complete quickly with Correct the article-noun agreement
a versatile machine
versatile machines
precise
and ask for no perks Replace the word
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as insurance and paid time off，leading to Linking Words
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they
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the
increase
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increased
more
competition than human beings in some occupations.Correct quantifier usage
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For instance
，
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industry
has shown that the shift from human Use synonyms
labor
to machine can yield high Change the spelling
labour
product
efficiency.
In conclusion，as with any revolution technology，Replace the word
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the robot
a robot
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will give rise to some negative effects including Fix the agreement mistake
robots
increase
employment pressure.But renewable development and choice Replace the word
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robot
will play important role in the human’s future.Fix the agreement mistake
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