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Some people think that robots are very important to human's future development, while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays,an increasing number of
people
 are concerned about the rapid growth of the robotics
industry
.
However
,whether the development of
robotics
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industry
 would bring
the
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possible adverse impacts has
cause
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 heated debate recently.
Personally
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 I agree more
with
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that robots are more on the side of liberating humanity from monotonous jobs and unleashing our creativity。
First
，it is obvious that the vision of the modern world where
human
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 play
a
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 important role of the creators，and artificial intelligence will construct machines to implement these creations.One of the benefits
that
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 robots free workers from repetitive and tedious
job
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 and allowed them
have
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 enough time for their
creativity
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 work and innovation.Especially in
industry
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 where
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the robot
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robot
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 can replace a number of
people
 to do the same things just like
people
 do ,which release
the
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productivity and increase efficiency.
Additionally
,in a daily life context,
more
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 and more advanced
robot
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 has adopted in
the
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healthcare,assisting surgery to success and helping disabled and senior
people
 improve their
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lifestyle
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life style
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.
Moreover
，
that is
 not to say that the development of
robot
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 would not cause negative effort
for
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 our daily life.
In contrast
，the
high speed
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 growth of
robots
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approach
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 to be
an versatile machines
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a versatile machine
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 that often complete quickly with
precise
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 and ask for no perks
such
 as insurance and paid time off，leading to
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they
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increase
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more
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competition than human beings in some occupations.
For instance
， Assembly line in the automobile
industry
 has shown that the shift from human
labor
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 to machine can yield high
product
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 efficiency. In conclusion，as with any revolution technology，
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robot
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 will give rise to some negative effects including
increase
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 employment pressure.But renewable development and choice
then
 come.
Therefore
,I believe
robot
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 will play important role in the human’s future.
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