In many countries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspapers. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

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consumption and recycling become one of
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major problems
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humanity.
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materials like bottles and newspapers are not recycled
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many countries. In my opinion,
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reason
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reasons
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for these are
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economical
resource
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of recycling and underestimated effect on our environment.
Governments
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strict regulations and persistent spread of knowledge would be the key solution
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overcoming that
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. Many developing countries do not have enough economical resources to support their recycling system,
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people of that
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countries
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do not have enough knowledge about recycling.
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, in Mongolia many projects have
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by
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the private
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sectors
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in order to improve
plastic
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waste
situation,
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it cannot have a huge impact on the implementation of
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system without proper funding. For developed countries, I believe
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reason is
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situation of
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urgent threat to
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. Some scientific articles have mentioned
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problem
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of governments which are not
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enough seriously due to
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of understanding. Many non-profit organisations and private sectors promote individuals to reduce using
plastic
bottles,
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that solution will take effect in the long run. There are fresh ideas like creating nanotechnology to consume
waste
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, but it is
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project
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the future. I consider
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approach for
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policy makers
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by creating strict regulations among industries and manufacturing facilities. According to some scientific articles, only 20
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of
plastic
waste
comes from personal consumption and 80
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of
waste
comes from big factories. To conclude, it appeals to me that non-profit organisations doing their best
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this
field, despite
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public
regulators
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slow progress. Lack of knowledge, insufficient funding and underestimated threat is the main cause of
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recycling
problem
,
hence
we can overcome
this
situation by creating better policy and encouraging
manufacturer`s
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manufacturers
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to increase their social responsibility by reducing
plastic
waste
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  • apathy
  • environmental impact
  • passive attitude
  • recycling infrastructure
  • sustainability
  • accessible
  • disposing
  • awareness
  • participate
  • incentivizing
  • motivate
  • tangible
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