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some people believe that allowing children to make thier own choices on everyday matters is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes.other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #children #thier #choices #matters #society #individuals #decisions
Nowadays some
people
 think letting
children
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choose their personal matters lead to selfishness,while others believe that
children
 making
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decisions
decisions is
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decisions is
 beneficial.
although
 in some issues
children
shouldnt
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shouldn't
should
 be allowed to make
decisions
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because
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because
 of their lack of knowledge,
i
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 believe is it really important to let them
making
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decisions
 for their
life
. some
people
 might believe young
people
 do not have enough experience to choose what is
the
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best for their
life
 and future,
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therefore
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 having them to do these choices is problematic. they think that these
decisions
 lead them to become inconsiderate
to
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the
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society and other
people
 and
priorities
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 their wishes only and when they are grown up,
instead
 of having
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sympathy
 toward others, they would be a selfish person who
do
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 not appreciate
others
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 hardworking and co-working. having youngsters
to
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make
decisions
 for their daily
life
 is really important, though. they learn how to analyse situations, think of possibilities and alternatives, choose the best path and face the
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consequences
consiquences
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consequences
. even though they make the wrong decision it is not meaningless because they would learn lessons through it and try harder to make a better choice
next
 time. they would be familiar with other options and become aware
how
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of how
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 daily
life
 works and become mentally stronger,
efficient
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 and productive.
also
, being able to choose for
life
 when about minor things
such
 as clothes, will affect
children
 personality. they would believe they are capable of doing complex duties so when they are adults they would be independent and
do
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not need to rely on other
people
 for their
life
.
for example
, a study
in
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 Cambridge university shows giving permission
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to
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ti
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children
 to make
decisions
 for their basic matters
for
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their
life
 improve their
self confidence
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 and help them to have enough
encourage
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 for facing
difficult
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 situation in adulthood. considering these,
although
this
 issue might be
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children
 in the way that they would
piroties
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priorities
pirogies
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life
upon
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 society,
i
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 believe
children
 should be able to choose
for
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their
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 simple issues in their
life
 because how it would be encouraging and
helping
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 them to be a successful person in the future and teach them even a
failour
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failure
 is a way for getting closer to
successing
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succeeding
success
.
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