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vital for pupils at schools and another one is that subject is only

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would love to highlight both of them with my own ideas.

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is not taken as a crucial part of

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at schools. Because,

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of juveniles choose some well-known and respected professions for their future life like

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economist, diplomacy, or doctor

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, they do not pay attention to

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part.

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, a child who

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to be a doctor

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loves

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chemistry and biology.

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and among them, the

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stage.

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, that guy may begin to think with regard to

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on

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subject is needless.

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, it should be reckoned by people. On the other side of the issue has many fruitful solutions for pupils.

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ability of creativity among juveniles might be enhanced with

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. They could be ownership of

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horizon if they train sometimes with that subject

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their spare

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they can imagine very well the case and find

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solutions so easy to problems.

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, nobody else knows about keeping

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in trouble

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on any illnesses at any

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condition, being

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and creative person can help to forget about

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in the mind.

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would like to recommend to humans in respect to

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art

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for learning to think more broadly. In conclusion,

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humanity

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many considerations about the

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as it should not be learnt by anybody because of the lack of demand or another

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can make

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people.

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wisdom is reached

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acting so simple and thinking broadly.