More and more countries have a problem with plastic waste, polluing the countryside and oceans. What problems does it cause? How can these problems be solved?

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Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

Introduction
Body paragraph 1 – Problems
Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

One of the first problems of the...
Another problem that needs to be considered...
A possible solution to this problem would be...
One immediate practical solution is to...

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Topic Vocabulary:

aquatic ecosystems
terrestrial ecosystems
entangled
degradation
toxic substances
infiltrate
food chain
economic implications
municipalities
biodegradable
responsible consumption
incentivizing
environmentally friendly

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More and more countries have a problem with plastic waste, polluing the countryside and oceans. What problems does it cause? How can these problems be solved?

Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Young people do not spend their holidays and weekends doing outdoor activities such as hiking and climbing in nature. Why is this? And how can we encourage them to go out?

Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Postponement, or the act of delaying a task, has been cited in some research articles as one of the factors for poor academic performance by some university students. What are some of the reasons behind students procrastinating, and what measures can be taken to address the problem?