You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, give details of your course and your arrival/departure date explain your accommodation needs ask for information about getting to and from the college

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Dear Sir, I am writing with regard to the course that I have enrolled in. I would like to inform you that the course is about safety instructions at construction.It will start on 27th October.The closing date is on 21st December.It will be held at Oxford University. I will be arriving on 25th October in London.I have booked a single room at the hotel and the location of the accommodation is within walking distance of the city centre.I would like to request you to provide me with some items

such

as a laptop,coffee machine and printer.Could you please,tell me how much these will cost? I would be extremely grateful if you could give me enough information about the hometown transport system.As I mentioned above,I will be living in the suburb.

That is

why I need some data about how I can go to college and come back to the hotel and which form of transportation is comfortable. Thank you for your assistance. Yours faithfully Malik Maliki

Submitted by malikli.malik1995 on Fri Oct 14 2022

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