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Sales companies often try to recruit people who are motivated by money, as they believe that it will make them work harder. do you believe people are motivated to work hard by money and what other factors should be considered when searching for new sales staff?

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Marketing
organization
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 often consider that monetary
perk
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perks
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 can help to achieve
best
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 output from a
person
.
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 there are many other
factor
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for example
 a
person
’s
behavior
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, outlook, education and prior experience cannot be overlooked while hiring someone.
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 following paragraphs will talk about
the
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both perspectives in detail. On the one hand, being wealthy enough to be able to feed your family and provide them with the basic need of
the
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life is always
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 by an individual,
hence
by
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luring someone with
the
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tempting incentives and salary can get the best out of a
person
. If you have a roof
on
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 the top, food to eat,
money
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 to educate your
offspring’s
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 you would not be all the time worried and can focus more on your duties which in turn will yield more profit for the company.
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, most managers don't mind staying late to complete their tasks.
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, a
person
’s background or
the
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earlier work experience is
also
 a key requirement while recruiting
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 latest research published in the Paris newspaper highlighted the point that most
of
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the
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employers prefer to hire a
person
 with already good command
on
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 their work so that, they can immediately start and there would be no need of orientation sessions and waste of time. In conclusion, higher salaries and
sale
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sales
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 commissions can move a
person
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in
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organization
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 for more productivity but, in the long term
interest
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 the degrees a
person
 is holding or the number of
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years
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years’
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years
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experience
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of experience
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 they have must be kept in mind.
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