Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. Do you agree or disagree?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that many point out that

instead

of visiting monuments and artefacts in

museums

, many prefer to travel

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a bookmobile.Personally, I tend to consider that

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point of view is well grounded,

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, according to some, we should not ignore the fact that

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most of us still feel the demand for

museums

.

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and foremost, it

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by some scientists that increasing

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much more

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rather than transmitting the exhibitions through

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social media. One of the main reasons behind that visiting

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ancient

museums

and observing exhibitions assists individuals to learn their history and culture

besides

that nowadays some poets' homes

are become

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house

museums

and they are the best way to know that situation at that century, for

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reason, most of

adolescents

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get motivation from house

museums

.

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the other hand, it can be

also

argued that the major inhabitants should spend their

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leisure time

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to popular

museums

even

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get much spiritual nourishment.

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museums

, they are able to use their mobile devices

such

as telephones on the internet as

this

way is more affordable and accessible.Take my brother as an example, he is pretty keen on visual art ,

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he does not have any spare time and money to go

foreign

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museums

as a consequence, he utilizes

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laptop to see exhibits. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final analysis we can say that public

museums

and art galleries are not common among both elders and

youngesters

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youngsters

because of developed technological devices ,

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humans find online

method

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beneficial.