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You recently bought an electronic gadget for home purposes. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter What is the gadget What you think about it Give advice about other alternatives your friend can buy

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Dear Kavita, Hello, I hope you are good in the health. As we met three months ago and you shared your desire with me to buy a microwave.
Although
 you have quite a lot of knowledge of electronic gizmos, you are getting confused among umpteen brands. I write
this
 letter to inform you that recently I purchased a SONY company zap which is one of the best microwaves available in the market. It costs me near about Rs. 20000 including installation. The most interesting thing was that they provided me with one free demonstration which really needed me.
This
 microwave works wonders for me because I just need to click the button to prepare any kind of food.
Last
 month, I tried many dishes like dhokla, cake, idli, pizza and many more. The best feature of the product is that it is very easy to clean and wipe. Fortunately, I got two free services within a year from a company.
Additionally
, I
also
 received a free chapatti and idli stand with it. I find
this
 product a wonder for me. Apart from
this
, you can buy an oven from a SONY company but the oven is unable to cook food. As I know your financial condition is not very good so I am glad to inform you that ‘BIG BILLION DAYS’ is starting on the 27 of
this
 month on Flipkart from where you can buy a product at half price which really benefits you. Looking forward to your response regarding the new microwave. Best regards, Kirandeep Kaur.
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