It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives. Does the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

Some individuals consider that it is essential to be adventurous in decision-making in matters that concern their private and career lives. In my opinion, I believe the

benefits

of taking risks which include another opportunity to achieve and explore more outweigh the drawbacks of not trying something different. One reason why the advantage of taking

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is more than the drawback is that it exposes

people

to unlimited opportunities.

In other words

, trying something different allows

people

to begin

to try other aspects they were never used to.

For example

, trying to eat a different kind of food can provide more nutritional

benefits

than the regular diet someone has eaten over the years.

In addition

, they might enjoy

this

new thing explored. Another point why the

benefits

of exploring other options outweigh the disadvantage of sticking to one's routine is that

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it helps

people

to achieve more. Most

people

who took a career break to get

further

education and try other jobs usually do better

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these new jobs and get more promotions.

This

promotion would not be possible if they has stuck with their old jobs and lifestyle.

For instance

, a sales assistant, taking a break to get a university degree will most likely get a managerial position after graduation because

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risk was taken to get more certifications and education. In conclusion, while there are varying views on the

benefits

and drawbacks of taking risks, I think the advantages of exposing

people

to different opportunities and achieving more in their private and career lives, outweigh the disadvantages.