You are having problems with a neighbour’s animals because the fence between your properties is old and In poor repair. You want the neighbour to pay half the cost of building a new fence. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter say what the problems are explain how a new fence will solve the problems suggest that the neighbour pays half of the cost You do NOT need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,
Dear Mr.Kumar,
I would like to bring your attention
about
your dogs which are damaging the Change preposition
to
fence
in the backyard.
As you know my fence
is in poor condition and the dogs are jumping on fence
when they try to play with the plant on your side of Add an article
the fence
backyard
Correct article usage
the backyard
due to
that fence
getting damaged day by day.
I am looking to replace the old fence
across my backyard which would resolve the property getting damaged by dogs as the new fencing I am planning is to improve
with Change the verb form
improved
pet friendly
materials which will not get damaged by the animals.
The total cost to Add a hyphen
pet-friendly
fence
for all 3 sides is $4500 per side $1500 and Add an article
the fence
a fence
other
two Correct article usage
the other
sides
neighbours are accepted Change noun form
sides'
sharing
the cost by $750 respective of their side, Change the verb form
to share
similarly
I would request you to bear the cost of your share of $750.
I am looking Add a comma
similarly,
to
Rephrase
forward to
hear
from you.
Thanks
VetriselvanWrong verb form
hearing
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coherence cohesion
Consider using more transitions between ideas to improve the logical flow.
task achievement
Make sure to clarify smaller details, like specific examples of damage, for a fully complete response.
task achievement
The letter effectively addresses the problem and offers a clear solution by proposing cost-sharing.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and respectful, which is appropriate for the request.
coherence cohesion
The letter is structured with an introductory greeting and a closing, which adds to its coherence and cohesion.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,