In recent years, pressure on school and university students has been increasing and they are pushed to work very hard from a young age. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Over the

last

few years, there has been an increasing amount of

pressure

that schools and universities put on

students

. They are motivated to

study

hard at an early age. In my opinion, I believe that

this

is a negative development for a number of reasons that will be outlined below

Firstly

, pushing

students

to

study

hard at a young age can put a lot of

pressure

on them. A kid should be given the right to enjoy his childhood and make beautiful memories during

this

phase

instead

of being made to focus on his educational performance. A recent

study

published by Harvard University showed that people who can not experience their childhood completely will have a tendency to feel extremely regretful when they grow up.

As a result

, it is parents' responsibility to ensure that their children have a beautiful childhood

Secondly

, when being forced to

study

intensively at an early age, people usually suffer from mental disorders,

such

as

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depression or anxiety when they reach adulthood.

Consequently

, they distance themselves from others as well as hurt themselves to lessen the pains they feel. A recent poll conducted at a University in Miami suggested that 80% of

students

voted for

pressure

from parents' expectations as the main reason for their depression.

Therefore

, parents need to pay attention to their children's well-being more

instead

of their scores In conclusion, I believe that putting

pressure

on

students

as a motivator for them to

study

is a negative development since it makes them feel regretful and suffers from mental disorders