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You have just moved into a new flat. Write a letter to your friend telling them tthat you have moved. In your letter: - describe the reason why you moved - describe the new flat - invite him or her to your new flat

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Dear Rahul, I hope you are enjoying your new job. I am just writing to let you know that I have moved out of my earlier place of stay, and I
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 to share with you. So the good news is that, recently, I decide to
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purchase
puchase
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purchase
 my own flat as it has been more than 15 years since I have been staying in rented properties. I felt like I needed to have a higher sense of security, for which what could be
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 option than buying my own house
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This
 is why I have moved out, and currently, I am living in my own home. I always wanted my permanent home to be in a less populated area with a very peaceful environment. Luckily I found a property exactly matching my needs. It's
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 the outskirts of Gurgaon city where even the pollution is significantly less than
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 main city. The key unique selling point of my flat is the view of lush green farms from my balcony. I just love
this
 property. To celebrate
this
 major event in my life, I am throwing a
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 party on coming Sunday. I want you to take out time
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 your busy schedule and come to my place for the celebrations. I will send you my new address over
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. I am excited to see you on coming Sunday. Best wishes, Aman
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