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Living in a a country where you have to speak foreign Language can cause serious social. problems, as well as practical problems. To What extent do you agree or dis agrees

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Today it is difficult to live abroad and communicate with new people. It will not be easy to go and live in another country, even if you know the
language
. In
this
 essay, I will consider why it is difficult to live abroad.
First
 of all, he must know the
language
 of the
place
 he is moving to.
In addition
, if you do not know the
language
 of the
place
 you have moved to, it will be very difficult for you to talk on the street and in various shops.
For example
, you need something in your daily life from abroad, you went to a store, but you don’t know the
language
 well, you asked the seller what you need, he misunderstood what you wanted and he gave you another product.
This
 happens because you don’t know the
language
 well. That’s why we need to know the
language
 of the
place
 we’re moving to.
In addition
, it is necessary to learn the religion and manners of the
place
, along with the
language
 of the
place
 you want to move to. If we cannot communicate with them, we cannot learn
their
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 religion. When you go on a trip, you feel very lonely because there is no one there to communicate with you. These are the harmful consequences of not knowing the
language
 and culture of a foreign country. In conclusion, while we cannot deny that moving to another country causes many problems, we can solve these problems with
language
.
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