The municipal corporation in the area where you live has decided to demolish a historical building to build a shopping center. Write a letter to the mayor of the corporation. In your letter: You have to explain why it is important to preserve the building suggest how the building can be used to benefit the local community.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction about the decision to replace our

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building which is located on the main road of Sakara with a shopping centre. I feel frustrated because I used to visit

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mansion when I was a child with my family. I have seen

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news on some channels and I suppose that

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decision has a diverse effect on our history and traditional community.

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, when I was heading to my work the following day after

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announcement, I noticed that myriads of people are reluctant to do

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because they consider

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new project as

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destruction of our history.

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I know that

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revenue will ameliorate our financial status and I admit that

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palace is in a bad condition, I suggest that we can utilize

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building as a historical place after renovating it

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of demolishing it. In

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manner, we will get a lot of benefits,

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, it will be a tourist attraction and give residents and foreign people the opportunity to know more about our great history. Hopefully, you will pay attention to

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situation. Yours faithfully,

rehameldweik

Oct 15, 2022

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