The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The two maps illustrate how the
centre
of a small town Islip are
going to Correct subject-verb agreement
is
develope
from the current situation to the future.
Correct your spelling
develop
Overal
, the maps demonstrate strong evidence Correct your spelling
Overall
and
a lot of new Correct word choice
that
building
are going to change in the future. Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
According to
the plan
the Add a comma
,plan
centre
of a
small town Islip Correct article usage
the
are
going to Correct subject-verb agreement
is
modernized
dramatically and Change the verb
modernize
totaly
.
First of all, the Main Road Correct your spelling
totally
demolished
and built the around comfortable Dual carriageway connecting Add a missing verb
was demolished
western
and eastern sides Correct article usage
the western
town
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of town
.
Add a missing verb
was.
Instead
shops buit
shopping Correct your spelling
built
centre
. The Bus station and Car Park
are going to buid
near Correct your spelling
build
Shopping
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the Shopping
centre
. Housing were
cleared in order to Change the verb form
was
buid
new housing Correct your spelling
build
several
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in several
place
near Change to a plural noun
places
car
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the car
park
, near Park
. Between Bus Station, Shopping centre
and Car park
on the one side and shops are going to build Pedestrians
only.
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for Pedestrians
According to
the developing plan
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,plan
shool
Correct your spelling
school
Shool
and Correct your spelling
School
Park
steadly
remained. One particularly Correct your spelling
steadily
interisting
fact in the developing plan demonstrate is Correct your spelling
interesting
not
Correct your spelling
no
road
connecting between Correct article usage
a road
north
and south side. Correct article usage
the north
Countyside
Correct your spelling
Countryside
located
Add a missing verb
is located
in
the north side.Change preposition
on
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