Some people say that physical education classes are an important part of a child's education. Others believe that it is more important to focus on academics during school time. Discuss both these views and give your opinion?

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are crucial to

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to learn and study

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major

subjects

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. Physical lesson focus on

exercise

but other major lessons improve our understanding way the real world work.

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own opinion. While some believe that focusing more on physical education subject

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very crucial to

children

. Playing sports in physical

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education

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education

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help improve

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health.

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, many students who participated in their P.E

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have better health and good mental

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strength

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strength

, because as they

exercise

their body

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chemicals that reduce anxiety we can see that many people who

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live longer than others that didn’t

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prolong our life and improve our

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healthy. The major lessons in school help us advance our knowledge. By teaching all the

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needed for applying

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subjects

in university.

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, chemistry

class

teach students about chemicals and elements

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job or university that required

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knowledge about

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chemicals

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not only apply to chemistry subject but

also

subjects

like business, astronomy, and biology classes.

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, advance and improve our

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understanding

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understanding

so we can use

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in the future. In conclusion, physical

subjects

help us stay fit and healthy and

academics

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lessons help advance our understanding and

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prepare

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prepare

us for the real world.

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, both of these

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subjects

are equally important to

children

.