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Nowadays people waste a lot of food that they bought from shops and restaurents. Why do you think people waste food?what can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?

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it can be seen these days that a lot of
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 is being wasted by many
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, and even the elite class do not bother to refrain from
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 act.there can be many reasons as to why they do
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, but it seems the busy schedule of public nowadays and attraction to different foodchains contributes to
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 factor.,
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,by the influence of social media along with community work with organizations can help tackle
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 issue, that we will discuss in detail in our essay. On the one hand,
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 wastage is a massive problem in today,s era,
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 the busy life and long working hours are the main cause,
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, the lack of cooking homemade meals and ordering extra
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 is easy and convenient for working class and students,
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, they cannot eat it all and it gets spoiled somehow and goes into the bin,
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,it is human nature that he always wants to try new things,fr example,numerous amounts of restaurants and fast
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 chain cause us drooling and we are forced to try something new,
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,we do not like every
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 item,s taste we buy so it ends up getting dumped ,unfortunately.
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,we cannot survive without
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 and if we keep on wasting our meals like
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 we will be short of resources soon,we can tackle
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 situation by encouraging
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 to cook more at home by using media to educate them about the benefits of freshly cooked homemade
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,and warning obesity,
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, we can donate
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 to some organizations that are working to help underprivileged and homeless persons so that it can be beneficial for them and we can prevent it from getting waste. In conclusion,I believe wasting
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 is a worldwide issue,due to the excessive buying of readymade foods and the establishment of enormous numbers of foodchains that attract
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.,but we can overcome
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 situation by enforcing
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 to make time to cook and distributing
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 among the needy can help us control
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 problem.
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