You are in a hospital with a broken leg.Your colleagues have sent you get well soon greeting cards and gifts.Write a letter to them and include : - Thank them for everything - Explain how you spend time in the hospital - Inform them about your recovery process

Dear John, I hope you are doing well.

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, thank you so much for sending me your get-well-soon wishes, really means a lot to me. I liked the statue of lord Buddha you sent me. I have kept that near to my hospital bed, it gives me positive energy. As you know, I have been here for the

last

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7 days, for the

first

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few days, it was good because everyone used to come here to meet me daily.

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, now I am feeling very bored here.

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, I have watched all the new web series on Netflix and Prime video.

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, my all-day routine has changed and now I eagerly want to go home now. Even the doctor

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confirmed that my leg is recovering at a good pace, and I'll be able to go back home in the coming week. The whole hospital staff help me in walking and I feel so thankful to them. Looking forward to seeing you

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week. All the best Regards, Shikha

shikha_dhingra

Oct 16, 2022

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

169 words

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