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In recent years more and more students are choosing to read e-books rather than paper-based books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#years #students #e-books #books
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Nowadays most
students
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 opt for
e-books
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instead
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 of paper-based books.I believe that choosing
e-books
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 could be beneficial but it has drawbacks as well. On the one hand,
e-books
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 can be beneficial to
students
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 because now in
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 modern era
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 children are well versed with the technologies,
In other words
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,it is much
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easier for them to do things online rather than on
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 since they find it more convenient rather than going out and buying one and standing in long queues,they find it easier doing it online
hence
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 saves their
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 and money as well.
In addition
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 ,it is
also
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 easy to access.
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,for one topic,they can do research on it and at the
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 it is easier for them to find meanings etc by referring to online google.
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 the storage would not be an issue since everything will be online.
On the other hand
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,
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 choosing
e-books
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 could be an issue as well.Being online for long hours can damage
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their
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their
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hence
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 resulting
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 poor
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.
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,most
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the
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students
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 intend to spend long and unnecessary
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 online.
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,they pretend to read
e-books
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instead
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 they are on some other sites,doing something which is not suitable for them,
hence
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 violating the freedom they are given for that moment.Another disadvantage of
e-books
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 could be power failure and
students
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 could be stuck due to it.
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,if a student is online reading
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 e-book or doing an activity and there is a sudden power failure
then
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 he or she will have to go through it all over again and
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will waste
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waiting for the power to restore. To sum up,though
e-books
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 are convenient and easy for
students
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 nowadays
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paper -based
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 books are better that
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 can rely on.
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