Today more and more people are overweight than before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this. What are main affects of this epidemic.

Over the recent years, a pervasive phenomenon that has been observed is that
people
are getting more overweight in comparison with before which is caused by various reasons. In my opinion,
this
issue causes so many vital risks to human
life
. It's obvious that there is a variety of factors that can lead
people
to have fatness issues but in my opinion, 3 main reasons can be considered for
this
phenomenon.
Firstly
, we live in the age of modernity and
people
are mostly busy all day long so
as a result
, they do not pose any spare time to spend
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doing exercise and workout and
consequently
, they will suffer from getting overweight.
Secondly
, over the previous years
people
are showing more interest in fast foods
such
as pizza, hamburgers,... and
although
these types of foods may taste great, they contain high amounts of fats and high calories which may put their consumers at risk of getting fat.
Finally
, an undeniable factor that can cause plumpness is stress, In today's lives most
people
are suffering from high levels of anxiety plus, stress can sometimes lead
people
to eat more than usual times and
as a result
, it can be counted as a source of getting overweight. It's uncovered that excessive obesity is one of the crucial problems in today's lives as well as it can affect human beings' lives harmfully. I believe its main effect is on
people
's average lifespan in a
such
way that, if the problem of being overweight expands over the coming years, it would considerably decrease humans' average
life
.
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instance plumpness can cause high-risk diseases
such
as high blood pressure or diabetes. Plus, obesity can lead to
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mobility , which
also
decreases the body's metabolism.
Accordingly
, due to all the mentioned reasons, the issue of being overweight can reduce the effective
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for each individual. In conclusion,
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once again restate my point of view that the phenomenon of excessive plumpness is one of the biggest issues in modern
life
and it is caused by different propellants.
Additionally
و I assume that
this
problem can have various effects on
people
's
life
especially, on the
life
span of men.
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