Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is two
category
of people the Change to a plural noun
categories
first
who thinks that every student
all over world
should Add an article
the world
study
what they are keen on others asserts that students should study
only necessary subjects
that will be helpful in the future such
as science and technology. I agree with the statement that says every student
should study
discipline
that they are interestedCorrect article usage
the discipline
.
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in.
However
in Add a comma
,However
this
essay
we will discuss both views.
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,essay
I
support Add a missing verb
do I
first
allegation ? In my experience with Change the article
the first
the
studying Correct article usage
apply
subjects
I came to the point of understanding that it does not matter what you study
, the important thing is what will you do with this
knowledge. If students will study
only what they like then
most likely most of them will use their knowledge in a practical way. I don’t think if Einstein was compelled to study
physics he would be a
genius Correct article usage
the
as
we know him nowadays. The secret of his success is enthusiasm. Correct word choice
apply
Moreover
he was passionate about it. Add a comma
,Moreover
Therefore
as we know enthusiasm and passion does not born
in compulsions.Change the verb form
bear
However
if we let students learn Add a comma
,However
subjects
that they like there is tremendous
probability that they surprise us with their creativity.
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the tremendous
a tremendous
On the other
hand
we do not have guarantees that every Add a comma
,hand
student
that has studied what he likes will earn a living by
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in
this
way. Otherwise
if everyone will do what they like Add a comma
,Otherwise
then
who will do other crucial work? Consequently
that would be more practical to choose Add a comma
,Consequently
subjects
which will always be in demand.
In conclusion
I want to say that we should support both categories. Especially when Add a comma
,conclusion
student
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a student
choose
what he likes it takes big Correct subject-verb agreement
chooses
courageous
to go against studying practical Replace the word
courage
subjects
that will provide you stable
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