You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person incharge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regardng the dates, program, accomodation and cost.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to seek information about the seminar on "Ethical Hacking", you are conducting in Singapore in the month of December 2022. I, Edward Smith, working as a Project Leader in an IT services company, would be very much interested in attending the conclave as it provides me insights into securing the software applications we develop.

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, please share information on the symposium details with respect to the dates , speakers, topics presented and the timings of the same.

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will assist me in planning my actions to seek necessary leave and approvals from my reporting manager.

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, will you be arranging the accommodation for the attendees or will it be the individual's responsibility? If I am to look after the stay, please let me know a few good places near the venue with decent food and hospitality.

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, am willing to know the cost of the congregation, in order to plan my travel and associated expenses. Looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest. Thanking you, Yours faithfully Edward Smith

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A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

177 words

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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person incharge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regardng the dates, program, accomodation and cost.

Structure your letter

Some people like to work in small companies or businesses while others prefer working for large companies or government organizations. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working for a large company or organization?

The world has many towns and cities constructed in previous centuries that were more suitable and livable for people in those times than they are now. What problems will this cause? What can be done to solve these problems?

Some people think secondary school students and high school students should be allowed to choose academic courses leading to university or practical courses leading to careers such as carpenters. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast food. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science as a subject. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society?