Some believe that children should start school after the age of 7 while others think that school should begin from a very young age. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People's opinion differs as to whether the correct
age
to start schooling is 7 or lower.,Use synonyms
Personally
I agree with the latter viewpoint.
Those who argue that students should start studying after the Add a comma
,Personally
age
of 7 have their reasons. Use synonyms
Firstly
, the mind is not developed Linking Words
an
early Change preposition
at an
age
. Due to ,Use synonyms
this
they are not able to focus and concentrate on their studies and learn properly. Linking Words
For example
, In Sweden, grades are improved by 1 point during the Linking Words
last
3 years after the Government makes 7 Linking Words
as
the minimum Change preposition
apply
age
for getting admission to schools. Use synonyms
Secondly
, if they begin school Linking Words
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at an
an
early Remove the article
apply
age
, it will put extra stress on their mind. Use synonyms
This
stress becomes mental trauma when they turn into an adult.
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However
, I sided with those who feel that children should start school at a very young Linking Words
age
because it will put them a step ahead Use synonyms
than
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of
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a student
the student
student
who Fix the agreement mistake
students
start
late. If Children attend school at Change the verb form
starts
young
Add an article
a young
age
, they are able to learn at Use synonyms
young
Add an article
a young
age
and gain more knowledge than those who begin late. Use synonyms
For
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Example
a boy in our street, start going to kindergarten at 4 and now he Add a comma
,Example
able
to speak more than the student who Add a missing verb
is able
begin
at Change the verb form
begins
age
of 7.Use synonyms
The another
reason is that attending Remove the article
Another
institution
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an institution
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at in
in
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an
early
stage Correct article usage
the early
improve
their social quality Correct subject-verb agreement
improves
such
as interaction with others Linking Words
making
friends.
In Conclusion, while there are Correct word choice
and making
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reasons
reasond
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reasons
believe
that Fix the infinitive
to believe
study
should start after 7, my own view is that it should Replace the word
studying
begins
at early Change the verb form
begin
age
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Correct your spelling
because
beacuse
it should help them to learn earlier and develop social skills in them.Correct your spelling
because
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