Discipline is ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some think discipline should be the responsibility of teachers

Given that "Discipline" is the individual's reflection of his personality, it is an important trait, schools are key in inculcating
this
in a student. On the other side of the coin, schools are finding difficulty in imparting
this
key quality to the students being influenced by the advances in communication and digital technology of present times. In the face of
such
challenges, it becomes imperative that teachers play a key role in bringing discipline to an individual's psyche, by driving
such
rules and regulations as needed and strictly enforcing the same so that each of us, proves to be a responsible citizen, that we are expected to be.
Firstly
, the kind of gadgets and information
that is
readily accessible to the learning lot, has triggered their sense of experimentation.
This
, many a time leads to inappropriate and unruly behaviour that becomes unacceptable by the larger population. One
such
example is the possible pranks played by noted people for fun, which some students try imitating blindly, causing harm to themselves and others.
Secondly
, there is an increasing need to enforce the right behaviour and nurture responsible actions that mankind expects.
This
can be effectively done by our teachers, who can effect proper behaviour during early age among the students.
Such
individuals, when they grow up in turn take up the task of maintaining and propagating morality in the social fabric. More so, with the teachers' efforts, we can realise a bright society
that is
disciplined and ready to uphold human values.
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