Some people think that exercise is the key to health, others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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exercise
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while others think that high quality
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. I, for my point of view, am convinced that both have equally
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a strong
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heart
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Moreover
, some kinds of patients are recommended to cure with exercise
also
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exercise
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