Some individuals argue people should buy only local products rather than foreign products. do you agree or disagree

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Nowadays it has been debated that, few of them think that, we should purchase locally manufactured goods

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of foreign imported goods. In my opinion, I agree to purchase local

products

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, I

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believe that quality & return policies should

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be the same as foreign companies. The essay will

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discuss points with appropriate examples to demonstrate and elaborate on the argument in the upcoming paragraphs.

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with, the fact is that foreign imported goods are getting more attraction through online branding on social media.

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, it is impacting the local manufacturing industry a lot.

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, my dad used to be the manufacturer of car stereos and he had around 40 engineers working in his factory

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when

Chinese manufactured

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products

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started coming into India, the competition got high because those

products

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were half in cost of local

products

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, after some struggle, he had to stop the factory & fired almost all the engineers. Later on, after a couple of years, people started realizing the loss of engineers & creative people.

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, to compete with foreign

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, some local manufacturers started developing low-quality

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so that they can meet the price of foreign

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on the other hand

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, foreign

products

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like clothes are very good in quality which our local manufacturers are not able to meet. In conclusion, while other individuals argue that they must

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try different things

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as international

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, I do not support

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view. In my own opinion, it is more important to prioritize your own

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and be of help to your own country.

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