In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In their advertising,
businesses
Use synonyms
nowdays
sometimes stress that their Correct the word
nowadays
products
are new in some way. From my point of view, some Use synonyms
businesses
want to have good Use synonyms
products
to give to the people, but Use synonyms
usually
they worry Add a comma
usually,
about
their Change preposition
that
products
are newer than some Use synonyms
other's
Change noun form
other
Use synonyms
businesses
Change noun form
businesses'
business's
products
. Use synonyms
In
think it is a negative development, because when Correct your spelling
I
businesses
stress about the quality of their Use synonyms
products
, sometimes they do something wrong Use synonyms
while
they are producing Linking Words
ther
. It is good when Correct your spelling
them
the
Correct article usage
apply
businesses
take care of and look after their Use synonyms
products
but with a limit. Use synonyms
According to
some experts, when you take a lot of care of something, you will probably do some things, about it, wrong. From my own experience, I was trying to Linking Words
make
three school projects, which my teachers asked me to do, and despite my hard work and because I was stressed about the projects I had to do, Verb problem
do
finally
failed because I had made a lot of mistakes. Linking Words
To sum up
, Linking Words
businesses
Use synonyms
nowdays
should not stress about their Correct the word
nowadays
products
being new in some way. Use synonyms
Besides
Linking Words
that
they should calm down and be careful Add a comma
that,
on
what they are producing.Change preposition
about
Submitted by connectakhilkg on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite