In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe that money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

As technology develops, many argue that the government should invest

money

in new high-speed

trains

; whereas, others suggest spending

this

money

on improving already existing public

transportations

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. I take the

first

view and believe that investing

money

in the construction of new railways is more advantageous. Investment in newly invented

trains

can save

time

when travelling to other cities.

Time

is an important matter

especially

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with people’s hectic

lifestyle

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in

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these days. While these

trains

are well known for their 100-kilometres per hour speed nonstop, existing transportation tools only can transfer people

70-kilometres

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70 kilometres

an hour.

That is

why nowadays we see these railways connecting metropolises more and more. Another advantage of these

trains

is their energy source. They work by electricity which is an environmentally friendly source of energy and can prevent

further

air pollution. These

trains

can transport hundreds of people at the same

time

, and if people do not have

this

alternative, they will use their own private cars, which use oil as fuel, leading to the emission of many polluting elements.

On the other hand

, improving existing public transportations cost less and can save the

countries’

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money

. More than millions of dollars

is

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needed for the infrastructure of these newly invented

trains

, but only more than half of

this

amount is needed for the other one. By investing

money

on

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already

existed

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ones, the government can save

money

for more important matters. The policy of Holland on improving existing bus lines and saving about one million dollars for

production

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of cars using solar energy is a good example. To sum up, investing

money

in

construction

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of new railways for high-speed

trains

is highly advantageous for

time saving

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and prevention of air pollution, but it should be bear

on

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mind that it can cost a lot. I believe that it is worth spending

money

on them .