In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? what is you opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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Nowadays

Nowadadys

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Nowadays

crime

shows and

crime

novels are gaining

popular

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. I think

crime

books

and

dramas are popular for the following reasons.

Firstly

, these

books

and

shows give people a sense of pleasure. It's more absorbing than the normal literary novel and

shows.

Secondly

it's

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its

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plot is more gripping and full of suspense.

Thirdly

, people usually are curious.

Crime

books

and

shows satisfy that. It

reveal

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the criminal's true motive at the end. In my opinion, most

crime

fiction and

crime

shows are full of violence.

This

can have a very negative impact on

teenagers

and

children

. They are drawn to these provocative acts of violence, thereby imitating these

behaviors

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This

is likely to hurt their classmates and friends. I remember when I was in junior high school. A boy in our class had a conflict with another boy. At

first

, they just

quarreled

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. Soon, they started fighting when the teacher came to settle the dispute, they were injured by each other on their face and some parts of

the

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body.

Afterward

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, the teacher understood why they are so violent. It's because they like to watch

crime

shows and imitate

the

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violent

behavior

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. Now some

pupil

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pupils

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like to use force to solve problems. These show that

crime

books

and

crime

shows really

has

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have

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a very bad influence on

children

and

teenagers

Children

and

teenagers

are the future of

this

world. I hope the relevant departments will pay attention to it and control the quality of novels and

shows. Make these works less negative for

children

and

teenagers

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? what is you opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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