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The Bar
Chart
illustrates the
duration
of telephone calls from different kinds of
telephone
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the telephone
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during the period of 1995 to 2002 in the UK. Overall, the
chart
of mobile call time has a steady
rise
while national and international fixed
line
calls found
slight
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a slight
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rise
and local fixed
line
call
duration
indicated
decline
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a decline
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in comparison to the beginning year. As exhibited in the
chart
, local fixed
line
calls took more than 70
billions
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billion
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minutes
in 1995 while national and international fixed
line
and mobile (all calls) were below 40 and 10
billions
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billion
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minutes
respectively.
Furthermore
, the bar
chart
represented the
duration
of local calls from 1995 to 2002 specified variation while in 1998 and 1999 levelled off and the following years in
declining
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a declining
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trend.
On the other hand
, national and international fixed
line
calls and mobile
call’s
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call
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(all calls) data trends stipulated a stable
rise
where fixed
line
call data increased from about 35 to 60
billions
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billion
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minutes
from 1995 to 2002.
Likewise
, mobile call
duration
shows a
more
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sharp
rise
in that period. In 1995 mobile calls
duration
was less than 5 billion
minutes
which soared to nearly 45 billion
minutes
in 7 years from 1995 to 2002.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • psychological addiction
  • mental health
  • curated images
  • self-esteem
  • instant communication
  • geographic location
  • information dissemination
  • professional networking
  • responsible use
  • negative consequences
  • time wastage
  • productivity
  • social comparison
  • social movements
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