Plastic is destroying the natural ecosystem in the ocean. What are the problems associated with this issues and what are the possible solutions?
Plastic
, that have
ejected Correct subject-verb agreement
has
to
the Change preposition
into
ocean
leads devastating
effects Change preposition
to devastating
to
the hydro-ecosystem. Change preposition
on
This
essay will discuss about
some Remove the preposition
apply
problems
like destroy of sea flora and fauna and realizes of toxic gases
and offer solutions for these problems
such
as stop
throwing out Wrong verb form
stopping
plastic
manufacture
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manufacturing
to
the Change preposition
in
ocean
as solution
for 1st Add an article
a solution
the solution
problem
and solution
to the 2nd is recycling Correct article usage
the solution
plastic
.
Plastic
takes a long time to decompose. Because of this
characteristic plastic
will swim on
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in
ocean
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the ocean
about
2 or 3 centuries. Fishes and other different marine life can confuse food with Change preposition
for about
plastic
that
leads to much amount of death among marine life. If Correct pronoun usage
which
plastic
was not eaten it leads to another
Fix the agreement mistake
other problems
problem
like realizes of toxic gases
that dangerous to people and animals. When plastic
is decomposing so gases
like methane and ethylene realizing into the atmosphere. For example
, these gases
one
of a cause of Add a missing verb
are one
greenhouse
effect on Earth Correct article usage
the greenhouse
also
these gases
give bad
influence Correct article usage
a bad
to
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on
the
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apply
human’s
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human
organism
. How humanity can prevent catastrophic Fix the agreement mistake
organisms
result
?
Each Fix the agreement mistake
results
problem
has itself
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its
solution
. These problems
are Correct your spelling
no
not
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no
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an exception
the exception
exception
. To solute 1st Fix the agreement mistake
exceptions
problem
humanity must stop throw
out Change the form of the verb
throwing
plastic
to
the Change preposition
into
ocean
and other places. Solution
for 2nd Correct article usage
The solution
problem
can perform if people will comply acts
that Change preposition
with acts
was
told Change the verb form
were
at
1st Change preposition
in
solution
. It is recycling of litter including plastic
. This
solution
can help to stop realizes of toxic gases
economy resources. For example
, in Europe
thanks to Add a comma
,Europe
recycling
of Correct article usage
the recycling
plastic
lowered realizes
of toxic Change the verb form
realize
gases
about
75%.
To conclude, Change preposition
by about
plastic
manufacture
is Replace the word
manufacturing
indispensable
part of our life that can give different dangerous Add an article
an indispensable
problems
. However
, everything on
people’s Add a missing verb
is on
hand
and if we will care Fix the agreement mistake
hands
to
Change preposition
about
environment
all of Add an article
the environment
problems
will be just a theory.Add an article
the problems
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite