Plastic is destroying the natural ecosystem in the ocean. What are the problems associated with this issues and what are the possible solutions?
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, that Use synonyms
have
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has
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into
ocean
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devastating
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to devastating
to
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on
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apply
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gases
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stop
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stopping
plastic
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manufacture
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manufacturing
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in
ocean
as Use synonyms
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solution
for 1st Add an article
a solution
the solution
problem
and Use synonyms
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solution
to the 2nd is recycling Correct article usage
the solution
plastic
.
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this
characteristic Linking Words
plastic
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on
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in
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ocean
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the ocean
about
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for about
plastic
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that
leads to much amount of death among marine life. If Correct pronoun usage
which
plastic
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another
Fix the agreement mistake
other problems
problem
like realizes of toxic Use synonyms
gases
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plastic
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gases
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gases
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one
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are one
greenhouse
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the greenhouse
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gases
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bad
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a bad
to
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on
the
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apply
human’s
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human
organism
. How humanity can prevent catastrophic Fix the agreement mistake
organisms
result
?
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results
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itself
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its
solution
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problems
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no
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an exception
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exception
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throw
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throwing
plastic
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to
the Change preposition
into
ocean
and other places. Use synonyms
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for 2nd Correct article usage
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acts
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with acts
was
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were
at
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in
solution
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plastic
. Use synonyms
This
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solution
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gases
economy resources. Use synonyms
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, in Linking Words
Europe
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,Europe
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the recycling
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realizes
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realize
gases
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about
75%.
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by about
plastic
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manufacture
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manufacturing
indispensable
part of our life that can give different dangerous Add an article
an indispensable
problems
. Use synonyms
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, everything Linking Words
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is on
hand
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hands
to
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about
environment
all of Add an article
the environment
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problems
will be just a theory.Add an article
the problems
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite