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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without any payment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Technology has changed the way of living conspicuously in that people’s habits have undertaken remarkable vicissitudes in recent years; one of the aforementioned habits is the habit of reading. Regarding
this
 fact, some people opine that printed
newspapers
 and
books
 will not be bought by people in the future now that all
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 can be read online without any payment. I highly agree with
this
 notion because of many reasons, and I am going to describe two of them in the following paragraphs.
To begin
 with, it is crystal clear that every physical object like
books
 or
newspapers
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, and in spite of paper-based
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, electronic ones are immune from being damaged by environmental factors or the passage of time.
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individuals’ tendency toward
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electronic
books
 and
newspapers
.
For instance
, British settlers prefer to study their desired contexts
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 a rainy day in London
instead
 of reading a wet newspaper.
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, scarcely can novels or contexts be found
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 the internet in that their electronic version prices were more than paper-based ones.
Besides
, they occupy a negligible room in analogy with highly thick and heavy novels.
For example
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plenty of free ebooks on his/her cellphone in order to study during the journey
instead
 of bearing a number of heavy and large
books
. Because of the abovementioned reasons, every day the number of people who are encouraged to purchase electronic types of
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 increases. To sum up, regarding the substitution of electronic and online types of
books
 and
newspapers
 with their printed counterparts in the future, I highly agreed with the aforementioned notion now that electronic kinds are more reasonable and convenient to bear in that the paper versions are doomed to disappear in the future.
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