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Music and other arts seem to be features of every society. In what ways are music and other arts important for societies and for individuals? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is
undenaiable
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undeniable
 that music and arts play a relevant role
on
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 every
society
, not only as a
leisure
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,
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 but
also
 as
a
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 expression of its identity.
Firstly
 and foremost, it is important to
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highlitght
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 that are several forms of
art
 which are part of our history
since
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very
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 longincuos ages,
such
 as primitive wall
painting
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 that were made by humans
on
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 pre-historic
society
 to illustrate their hunting activities.
However
,
the
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art
 as we know
today
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 is a derivation of
theathers
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theatres
 that started centuries ago in
greece
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 and
rome
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, by that time individuals would have their feelings represented by artistic acts,
therefore
 it could
be
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seem
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seen
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 as an expression of their social arrangements. Both examples, despite
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being
beeing
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being
 so different from each other, are
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similar
simmilar
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similar
 in terms of how
art
 was
use
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 to define the
identify
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 of that particular
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moment
momentum
momentun
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moment
on
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 human history.
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Additionally
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Additionaly
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,
from
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 centuries on,
art
 was considered
as
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a relevant source of
leisure
that
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 could be demonstrated by the relevance that royal families gave to it. Queens and kings all over the globe
woul
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would
rellay
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really
rely
 on performances to
fulfill
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 their need of finding happiness, opera is one example of it,
this
 musical
art
 was one of the most
glamouros
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glamorous
glamourous
 events of past societies and it is still alive as a
leisure
 activity that
express
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expresses
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 the beauty of music while gives the
espectators
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spectators
 all kinds of emotions. In conclusion, it is possible to see how relevant
art
 and music are for
society
 and individuals
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 that it's
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being
been
beeing
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been
 a source of identity for all different eras that our
society
 has gone through while, at the same time, it
fulfills
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 individuals with happiness by being
a
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leisure
 that produces all kinds of emotions.
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