Music and other arts seem to be features of every society. In what ways are music and other arts important for societies and for individuals? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

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expression of its identity.

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human history.

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centuries on,

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could be demonstrated by the relevance that royal families gave to it. Queens and kings all over the globe

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their need of finding happiness, opera is one example of it,

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was one of the most

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the beauty of music while gives the

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and music are for

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and individuals

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that it's

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has gone through while, at the same time, it

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individuals with happiness by being

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that produces all kinds of emotions.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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