Some people prefer the lifestyle and activities offered when living in a cold environment. Others prefer a hot environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many humans selected living in
a
coldest atmosphere and they suggested Change the article
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this
is situation
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a situation
the situation
to
other Change preposition
for
indevelidual
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individual
However
, majorities people
prefer to sizzling milieu because they adore this
location. From my point of view, it is hot whether worthwhile for mankind because there are many sun
days in my nation.
These days, some Replace the word
sunny
people
argue that the
sunny nature is extremely beneficial and funny than cold Correct article usage
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environment
because they do a number of activities this
sitting. Also
, they said that,
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this
environment
very
useful for Add a missing verb
is very
human's
health because when Change noun form
human
people
live in the
hot days country, they savour Correct article usage
a
the
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nature
foods because a lot of fruits and vegetables Replace the word
natural
growing
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grow
the
heated boiling atmosphere. Correct article usage
a
Moreover
, the
sunshine Correct article usage
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really
valuable for mankind's conduct. Take Add a missing verb
is really
for example
, according to the doctor's search human's
body take need 35 Change noun form
human
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per cent
precent
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per cent
substance
from the sunshine.
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of substance
On the other hand
, it is believed by some people
, cold climate countries have less dust than hotcountries
, so many Correct your spelling
hot countries
host countries
people
find it comfortable and beneficial to live in such
an environment
because it is comfortable for everyone to work or study in cool weather. If people
work in hot weather, they may sweat a lot. Also
, people
living in cooler climates are less likely to suffer from respiratory diseases because cooler climates have less dust. For example
, people
suffering from such
diseases are advised to go to mountain slopes and cool places because the air in such
places is very clean.
In conclusion, some people
like warm environments because they can be very funny. However
, some people
believe that living in a cold environment
is beneficial for everyone. I think it is better to live in a warm environment
than to live in a cold environment
because the
warm weather gives energy to mankind.Correct article usage
apply
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