Some people prefer the lifestyle and activities offered when living in a cold environment. Others prefer a hot environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many humans selected living in
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coldest atmosphere and they suggested
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other
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individual
.
However
, majorities
people
prefer to sizzling milieu because they adore
this
location. From my point of view, it is hot whether worthwhile for mankind because there are many
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days in my nation. These days, some
people
argue that
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sunny nature is extremely beneficial and funny than cold
environment
because they do a number of activities
this
sitting.
Also
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this
environment
very
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useful for
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health because when
people
live in
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hot days country, they savour
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nature
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foods because a lot of fruits and vegetables
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up in
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heated boiling atmosphere.
Moreover
,
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sunshine
really
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valuable for mankind's conduct. Take
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body take need 35
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per cent
precent
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per cent
substance
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from the sunshine.
On the other hand
, it is believed by some
people
, cold climate countries have less dust than
hotcountries
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hot countries
host countries
, so many
people
find it comfortable and beneficial to live in
such
an
environment
because it is comfortable for everyone to work or study in cool weather. If
people
work in hot weather, they may sweat a lot.
Also
,
people
living in cooler climates are less likely to suffer from respiratory diseases because cooler climates have less dust.
For example
,
people
suffering from
such
diseases are advised to go to mountain slopes and cool places because the air in
such
places is very clean. In conclusion, some
people
like warm environments because they can be very funny.
However
, some
people
believe that living in a cold
environment
is beneficial for everyone. I think it is better to live in a warm
environment
than to live in a cold
environment
because
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warm weather gives energy to mankind.
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