Some people prefer the lifestyle and activities offered when living in a cold environment. Others prefer a hot environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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coldest atmosphere and they suggested

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individual

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, majorities

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prefer to sizzling milieu because they adore

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days in my nation. These days, some

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sunny nature is extremely beneficial and funny than cold

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because they do a number of activities

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this

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useful for

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health because when

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hot days country, they savour

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nature

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foods because a lot of fruits and vegetables

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up in

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heated boiling atmosphere.

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sunshine

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valuable for mankind's conduct. Take

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body take need 35

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from the sunshine.

On the other hand

, it is believed by some

people

, cold climate countries have less dust than

hotcountries

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hot countries

host countries

, so many

people

find it comfortable and beneficial to live in

such

environment

because it is comfortable for everyone to work or study in cool weather. If

people

work in hot weather, they may sweat a lot.

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living in cooler climates are less likely to suffer from respiratory diseases because cooler climates have less dust.

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suffering from

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diseases are advised to go to mountain slopes and cool places because the air in

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places is very clean. In conclusion, some

people

like warm environments because they can be very funny.

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, some

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believe that living in a cold

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warm weather gives energy to mankind.

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