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Today, some people think that universities should accept equal numbers of female and male in every subject. Others believe that this is an unacceptable policy. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In
such
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is unnecessarily balance
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 in any subject in an institution. While there
also
 has a theory of egalitarianism believed to support
gender
 equality in every aspect including education. From my standpoint, I firmly believe that students in university have better choose their major regardless of
gender
.
Firstly
, it is indisputable that more and more students
enroll
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 in university, but no one can control how many males or females will register
in
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 a specific subject. University education should be based on
talent
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 on through endeavour as well as
their
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performance.
In addition
, not all of them are equally in a concrete major, they have their own choices.
For instance
, some careers like
drivers
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 or firefighter are undeniably not
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appropriate
approriate
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appropriate
 for females and they show less interest.
On the other hand
, women get priority in jobs like nursing or
babysitters
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, etc.
Therefore
, students’ wishes and merit should be considered over the proportion of
gender
 quantity.
Secondly
,
gender
 equality can
also
 bring a myriad of stunning effects. It quickly cuts down the situation of lacking
labor
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 in a specific job,
therefore
, stable sources of workers are always available, which can guarantee the remaining
of
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survival of an organization. That concept may become pivotal in some aspects, but in my perspective, it does not provide well-training workers. To sum up, to sophisticated, developed, and
industrialized
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 world runs on the wheels of education;
as a result
, both
gender
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genders
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have
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 better choose what they want to be able to develop in
such
a
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an
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 effective way to make sure they can survive in
such
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a such
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competitive
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 world.
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