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Some people prefer the lifestyle and activities offered when living in a cold environment. Others prefer a hot environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #lifestyle #activities #environment
Nowadays one of the widely discussed issues is that, residing in a place that requires
to communicate
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 with others in a completely different
language
 may cause a number of
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 and empirical problems. Personally, I completely agree with
this
 view and
this
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this
 statement. On the one hand, individuals who live in foreign countries or do not understand the native
language
 may struggle to understand the local rules and culture of the certain country which leads
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 issues, because it will be too difficult for them to do
other kind
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another kind
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 of things like shopping, communicating with native speakers and so on. Taking
Russia
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 Federation as an example, which is one of the most migrated countries among newcomers who have faced some serious social problems since most of them do not speak
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russian
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language
.
On the other hand
, the majority of humans who immigrate to other countries without learning the
language
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the
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 certain nation might face some troubles while they are applying for a job or communicating with other people.
In addition
 to
this
, it can
also
 be too difficult for them to make new friends,
for example
, my brother who went to the US has faced
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some
language
 barriers while applying for a job and talking with natives. To conclude, having everything mentioned
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I can come to the conclusion
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that, individuals who move to other
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 will face communal and employment problems if they go there with
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little
language
skill
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.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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