Investment in local amenities such as leisure centres is the best way for the government to foster a good community spirit. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

A good way to encourage
people
to stay united is by funding community facilities
such
as centres of free time. From my point of view, I completely agree with
this
statement, because it will stimulate a good community spirit. In the following
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I am going to present other effective measures. One of the
first
things we need to take into consideration is that investing in public centres or even building new ones is very beneficial.
For example
,
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of swimming pools, dance clubs,
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galleries with low entrance fees would mean that more
people
would be encouraged to visit
such
places. Visitors will have higher chances to meet new
people
with
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interests and it will be easier for them to create friendships. In the
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public will feel safer and calm in the world since they will have more acquaintances.
However
,
this
is not the only solution.
Firstly
,
organisation
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of big events will gather
public
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together.
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, making different festivals,
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fairs in the parks or streets will definitely bring
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attention. Participants will have a chance to show their talents, making them feel comfortable being open to others.
Secondly
, connecting students with each other as well as workers will have a huge impact on their communication and work level. Creating forums
such
as online platforms and different activities for entertainment will create communicative and cooperative relationships, who will accomplish more productive work, because of the support of others. To conclude, I consider that every
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measure
mesure
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measure
is effective as long as they put effort into it, making advertisements and free bonuses
People
tend to like things which are organised well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • ammunities
  • leisure centre
  • sense of togetherness
  • boost the local economy
  • inclusive events
  • diverse range
  • instil a sense of pride
  • shared identity
  • accessibility and connectivity
  • public green spaces
  • community bonding
  • frequent community service projects
  • community-based educational programs
  • promotes physical health
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