nowadays the increasing of garbage (waste) is a real concern. why is this happening? What can be done to solve this problem?

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from my prospect in

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nowadays the increasing of garbage (waste) is a real concern. why is this happening? What can be done to solve this problem?

Fully explain your ideas

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

group or team activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are done alone. do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that the media has to right to publish detail of people’s view, while other thinks it should be controlled. Discuss both views.

Childcare training courses should be mandatory for all parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples.