nowadays the increasing of garbage (waste) is a real concern. why is this happening? What can be done to solve this problem?

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It is hard to deny that nowadays the
increasing
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of
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in

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garbage
do
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does

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cause a series
problems
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of problems

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which
comes
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come

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to a serious problem that many
people
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concerned
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are concerned

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about. There are lots of
the
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apply

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things
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that
people
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tend to just throw away without ultimately
use
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using

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and turn
it
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apply

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to
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into

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trash,
such
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as clothes , bags as well as food. So
i
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I

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would state two
mainly
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main

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reason
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reasons

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from my prospect in
this
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essay.
To begin
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with,
one
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of the mainly
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reason
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reason

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reson
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reasons
should be the
high speed
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high-speed

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development
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of development

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of
the
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technology ,
people
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tend to be hard to satisfy with the same thing ,
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such
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such

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sush
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such
as the same style of clothes and the product which are not the latest version .since the high technology make all the
products
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is
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are

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produced
more
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apply

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cheaper and
more
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apply

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faster,
people
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would have more
chioces
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choices

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since they are
more
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apply

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cheaper with the manufacture ,than the past for all the
things
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that use in our daily
life
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, in
this
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way ,
people
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would like to buy
one
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thing with different
apperance
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appearance

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which have the same function ,
such
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as shoes ,even though
one
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pair of the same function shoes is enough for the daily use.
On the other hand
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,
people
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are easier to buy the
things
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that they do not need or like in
this
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world
that
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where

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all
kind
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kinds

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of
the
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apply

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advertisements
are
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is

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fully fill with our daily
life
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, it is
obviously
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obvious

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to see all the advertisement
is
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apply

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persuading you to buy the
products
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that they recommend since all the company need to make great profits, but the effects and the looks in the pictures or the videos may be different with the
pratical
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practical

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products
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, and
people
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who like to keep the pace with the fast change world
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,

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especially the young
people
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which means the fast fashion would be popular, all the
things
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are more
easiler
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easier

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to get and the price
are
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is

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more
afforable
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affordable

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,
people
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whi
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who

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buy the wrong
things
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that do not meet
thie
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the
this

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expectation , just tend to throw it away and buy something new , just a circle with more and more waste in
this
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way. Since the reasons are clear , the solutions are more clearer to see ,
one
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of the
solution
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solutions

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is to solve the advertisement which spread
the
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apply

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unmatching
products
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or fake information , it is should be
launch
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launched

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a law by governments to standardize the information that all the
seller
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sellers

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need to obey ,
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another
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another

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anothoer
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another
solution should
be raise
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raise

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the awareness of the consumer to notice it is their duty to protect the
enviornmrnt
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environment

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we live , and realise what they really need and live a more comfortable
life
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without
watse
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waste
water

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.
from
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In

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my personal view ,
this
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action should be taken by the schools that could add some
course
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courses

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to help children think highly of protecting
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our
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our

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out
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our
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planet and live a simple but better
life
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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