The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace .Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy .The benefits of nuclear technology for outweigh the disadvantages.Do you agree or disagree?

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that

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nuclear guns are extremely intimidating and they should be completely averted for spreading

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peace to the world.

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, others believe that nuclear innovations are

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cost effective

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as well as eco-environment friendly .

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incredibly convinced that the pros are greater than the cons. On the one hand,

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nuclear technology brings considerable benefits.

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a relatively sustainable energy source.

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, nuclear

power

is particularly safe and does not trigger harmful impacts

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the environment.

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,it could help to reduce carbon emission that causes

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global warming.

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furthermore

, nuclear

generotors

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generators

stations are cleaner than fossil fuel

power

stations.

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,with its improvement ,the danger of accidents

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being diminished

as a result

majority of countries are now considering it as a solution to dramatic oil and natural gas prices, increasing demand for electricity and worries about pollution and climate change.

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those are more beneficial and

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is fairly essential to the

power

generation.

On the contrary

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trend cannot be

advantegous

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advantageous

due to several reasons.To commence with,

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plant is extremely expensive.To illustrate

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point ,many

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under developed

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nations do not have sufficient raw materials to generate nuclear plants simply because they are super expensive.

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, radioactive rays contained in

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energy produced by

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nuclear

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lead to serious health issues

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workers.

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,

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figure of labours

exposed

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to cancerous diseases because of dangerous radiation.Plus,

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growth in nuclear

power

in some countries as they

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for nuclear weapon production and could

ingnite

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nuclear war.

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, people refute it in order to spread

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peace and avoid the

worldwild

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worldwide

war.

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,America threw duo nuclear bombs over

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Japan

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tended

to

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a massive wreck in

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whole buildings and infrastructures and killed lots of people.So,nuclear technology can be detrimental as well To sum up,

although

the negative aspect owned by

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serious trend,

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strongly accept that nuclear invention is an alternative way

of

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the rest types of energy as it is totally safe towards the earth's atmosphere and cheaper compared to others.

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believe that

such

merits

are outweigh

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the disadvantages.