Some believe it is the responsibility of government to take care of the environment, others think people are responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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the issue of
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care of the environment has become highly controversial. some
people
say that
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government
governments
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
need to take care
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of everything
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,
however
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others
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say that every person
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to
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involve
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this
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. in
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will explain both
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of the argument and provide my overall opinion. A wide range of
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why
people
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feel
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that
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governmental
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the govermental
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govermental
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governmental
process is best for solving
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issue
issu
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. one of the prime
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is
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. if we search the environmental
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then
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we
essaly
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easily
identify our water
pollution
,
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and air
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pollution
.
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is the main two major
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pollutions
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in your country.
traditionaly
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traditionally
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indrustry
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industry
use
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chemicals
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for
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producing
produching
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producing
production
there
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product
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products
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but
this
is the
problem
because after
there
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work every company thro the
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unused
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camical
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chemical
in
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the river
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river
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or any garbage
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, as a result,
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as a result
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they
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make water
pollution
alos
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and
they make air
pollution
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government
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goverment
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government
make
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any rules
for
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that if any company use
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harmful
harmfull
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harmful
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chemical
or other
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thing
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this
time
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government
goverment
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government
take any action
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against
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aginst
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against
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the company.
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many
people
also
think that if
everyone
fulfills
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their environmental responsibilities
than
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then
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there was no
problem
.
for
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if
everyone
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there
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home and
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around
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around
there
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their
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side
on
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at
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this
timethere
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time there
was no grain of sand in the environment. so they safe from air
pollution
.
secondly
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if everybody plants more
tree
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trees
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around
there hose
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their house
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or
there
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their
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garden
its
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will be most effective for
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the climate
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.
beacause
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because
now a days
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nowadays
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you stand a danger
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position
just for climate change reasons. so if
everyone
make
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more trees
i
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think
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thing
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think
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this
is good for us because
its
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help
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to reduce climate change.
everyone
also
need
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to look for
the
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harmful product and try to reduce
the
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camical
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chemical
use in
agriculteral
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agricultural
procrss
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process
or other work . In
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conclusion
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conclusion
conclution
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my opinion is that if
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government
governments
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
take
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takes
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the
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apply
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responsibility
this
time
they take more
time
but if
people
take
the
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responsibility tahan in
many
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short
time
possible to solve
this
problem
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental policies
  • regulated emissions
  • green technologies
  • eco-friendly practices
  • recycling
  • energy consumption
  • sustainable products
  • collective impact
  • environmental consciousness
  • infrastructural development
  • global warming
  • climate change
  • conservation efforts
  • public-private partnership
  • sustainable development
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