Some people think computer and internet are important in children's study, but others think schools and teachers are important? Discuss both sides.

I think that the

internet

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and the

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are important for

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the education

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of children because at the

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teachers

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don't teach their lessons in schools. Let's discuss two sides

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of all, at the

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, to find information the

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and the

computer

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come to our help

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,

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we all love to use the

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. And the

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can find any news and information. Even the

internet

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can find lessons for any

subjects

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by

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on

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You Tube

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.

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, I am at the

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if

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don't have money

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for a

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book

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just read it through the

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and

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is solve

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.

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, if there was no

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internet

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and

the

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computer

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the

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during the

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pandemic,

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we can't study at all communicate,

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or discuss

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with friends and classmates.

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,

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think that at the

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schools and

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is just show-offs who just sit and go,

but

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of

course

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some

teachers

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are very good

teachers

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their

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in their

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lessons but most are bad

teachers

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.

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, in my school teacher require uniforms and attendance they are not interested in learning, so

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only go to school in order to

fun

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have fun

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with my friends and play

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or dare with them. In conclusion, from my point of view,

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think that the

internet

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and the

computer

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are

important

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more important

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than schools and

teachers

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,

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because now many people study with the

internet

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, even prepare for

studies

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their studies

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themselves and at

all

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apply

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now even

teachers

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to

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apply

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ask for help

on

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the

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