The government should not waste money on arts as this money would be better spent on other projects like sanitation of infrastructure Do you agree with the above statement?

society

believe

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that apex power should utilize

money

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the money

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to fund basic needs rather than spending for leisure. I strongly vote for

this

statement,

this

essay will

depicts

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why is it so.

To begin

with, supreme power should reserve money for the well-being of individuals. Because lack of medication is one of the major

threat

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threats

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to a nation so the authorities should make a plan for developing the health sector before spending the cheque for entertaining

public

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the public

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.

However

, only a person who is physically strong can perform

neither

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or

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participate in an event. For an instance, one of my

friend

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friends

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who is

great

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a great

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play-back singer got infected with

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through

throughout

thought

throught

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a throught

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infection

although

, with the modern treatments cure was lightning fast. So

the

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apply

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medical care should not be given

second

place when it comes to

developments

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development

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.

On the other hand

, making

community

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to

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have a source

income

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of income

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should be given importance, The era is changing day today so making sure that

literacy

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the literacy

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rate of the country is rising each year should be yet another factor for budgeting in the nation. When the job market is stable with more

number of

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opportunities crowd can cultivate

better

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a better

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standard of living.

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, India is known for IITs and IIMs, since the population

have

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has

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privilege

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the privilege

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of good quality education their pay scale is greater henceforth, it diversely affects their standard of living. To sum up, I am solely convinced by the fact that spending more money on basic needs and infrastructure is important for the citizens rather than enjoying short-term happiness from leisure activities.