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Nowadays, more and more people are moving from the countryside to cities, which are becoming overcrowded. What are the reasons for this movement to cities and what can be done to reduce it?

#people #countryside #cities #movement
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,
movement
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the movement
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 of many
people
 from the village to the capital
cities
 has become increasingly obvious.
Consequently
,
this
 problem led to overpopulation in the capital
cities
. I hold the belief that the government puts
this
 issue
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 consideration to reduce
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 effects of it. My point of view is going to define the reasons and find possible solutions for
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them
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. From my perspective, reasons
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 the movement from the rural
cities
 to the urban
cities
 by a number of individuals can be represented by
scarcity
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the scarcity
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 of many services related to water, electricity, roads and other services
that
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as
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the
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 of life for humans not as a way for entertainment.
Thus
, the lack of these resources makes some
people
 living in the countryside move to the city.
In addition
 to that many individuals, especially young
people
 who are ambitious, work in facilities located in the
center
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 of the city; lack of means of transportation doesn’t enable those
people
 to arrive
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 work on time,
thus
 they have to move to the
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 so as not to lose their jobs.
This
 means that the government should pay more attention to that issue. I think that officials should provide these villages with
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 resources as we mentioned in the previous paragraph and repair roads to facilitate
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movement inside and outside the rural
cities
, as well as
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 means of transportation
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available to enable employers to stay on time at work. In conclusion, after
this
 essay has manifested the above-mentioned views, it can be reiterated that
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the replacement
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 of the villages with
the
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cities
 by many
people
 must be overcome to get rid of the overcrowding by following certain reasons and ideas to find possible solutions and apply them.
However
, the implementation may take a time to see perceived results , but it will be achieved.
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