Air pollution is one of the largest problems the world is facing today. What are some causes of air pollution and what measures can be proposed to solve this problem?

Air
pollution
is one of the biggest troubles
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humanity faced in
XXI
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the XXI
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century.
This
essay will discuss why deforestation and greenhouse
gases
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emissions manufactured by factories can cause
air
pollution
and how non-waste
production
and reforestation can help to slow down
this
problem. Greenhouse gases like
carbon
dioxide
and nitrogen
dioxide
pollute the
air
and cause acid
rains
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rain
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. Acid rains
acidifies
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the soil from which plants absorb nutrients and minerals. Deforestation slows down the conversion of
carbon
dioxide
into oxygen. According to the UN, the amount of
carbon
dioxide
processed by trees fell by 7% between 2017 and 2018. Non-waste
production
is one of the most effective solutions
of
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air
pollution
. Non-waste
production
not only helps to increase
production
,
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also
it
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helps to decrease
amount
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of waste created by plants and factories. Reforestation can help to increase the share of oxygen in atmospheric
air
. Plants convert
carbon
dioxide
into oxygen by photosynthesis. “One hectare of poplar forest adsorbs 7-8 tons of
carbon
dioxide
per
year
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” said co-owner of Lukoil Leonid Fedun in the interview about perspectives of trade in
air
purified from
carbon
dioxide
.
Thus
it is clear that finding a solution to the problem of
air
pollution
is a common task. At stake is the life of not only humanity but the entire planet as a whole.
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