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Air pollution is one of the largest problems the world is facing today. What are some causes of air pollution and what measures can be proposed to solve this problem?

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Humanity is struggling face to face with
air
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the air
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 contamination and now it is the most massive problem.
This
 essay discusses not only the causes of
air
 pollution like people`s evolving and natural disasters
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 but
also
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as
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 diminishing human influence and supporting nature.
Usual
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 human lifestyle contributes the greatest part
of
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 soiling the
air
, approximately 95%
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 because people always invent something new and production
also
 grows dramatically.
For instance
, in order to make a can, people must gain aluminium in mines and
this
 gaining emits a lot of CO2,
then
 metal travels to a factory, where it melts and melting needs an enormous amount of energy. Travelling to a shop
also
 ejects venomous gases. Not only CO2 is disposing but other toxic fumes, like methane,
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. That`s why our lifestyle
is destructs
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 our atmosphere.
Other
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 5% is
contribution
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the contribution
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 of certain natural
disaster
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disasters
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,
forest
fire
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fires
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. Because of global
warming
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,warming
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 the amount of
forest
fire
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fires
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 is increasing and the emitting CO2 is
also
 increasing. Considering solutions community decided to deplete human influence on
air
 consistent. It is not simple as people think, society needs to choose what products and goods must be cancelled or what products must change the way it produced.
However
,
forest
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a forest
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fire
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fires
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 can be stopped just by
an
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 usual support from
government
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the government
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, volunteers and so forth. In conclusion, people`s activity is the main reason why
air
 pollution still exist,
forest
fire
also
 makes own consequences. And everybody can help
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 only limiting production and helping
environment
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the environment
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.
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