Air pollution is one of the largest problems the world is facing today. What are some causes of air pollution and what measures can be proposed to solve this problem?

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Humanity is struggling face to face with

air

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the air

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contamination and now it is the most massive problem.

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essay discusses not only the causes of

air

pollution like people`s evolving and natural disasters

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but

also

solutions

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diminishing human influence and supporting nature.

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human lifestyle contributes the greatest part

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soiling the

air

, approximately 95%

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because people always invent something new and production

also

grows dramatically.

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, in order to make a can, people must gain aluminium in mines and

this

gaining emits a lot of CO2,

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metal travels to a factory, where it melts and melting needs an enormous amount of energy. Travelling to a shop

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ejects venomous gases. Not only CO2 is disposing but other toxic fumes, like methane,

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. That`s why our lifestyle

is destructs

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our atmosphere.

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5% is

contribution

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the contribution

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of certain natural

disaster

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disasters

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forest

fire

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fires

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. Because of global

warming

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,warming

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the amount of

forest

fire

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is increasing and the emitting CO2 is

also

increasing. Considering solutions community decided to deplete human influence on

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consistent. It is not simple as people think, society needs to choose what products and goods must be cancelled or what products must change the way it produced.

However

forest

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a forest

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fire

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fires

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can be stopped just by

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usual support from

government

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the government

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, volunteers and so forth. In conclusion, people`s activity is the main reason why

air

pollution still exist,

forest

fire

also

makes own consequences. And everybody can help

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only limiting production and helping

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the environment

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Air pollution is one of the largest problems the world is facing today. What are some causes of air pollution and what measures can be proposed to solve this problem?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many employees can now do their work from home using modern technology. However, this change may only benefit workers, not the employers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

discuss whether the advantage of nuclear energy outweigh the potential risks and environmental concerns.

Many people believe that healthy eating and the importance of healthy food should be taught in schools. Others say that parents should teach their children about healthy food and diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion with relevant examples.

Nowadays, many people have to work long time, and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? What employers can do to make their life easier?