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It is believed that citizens should pay tax to show their social responsibility. Others believe citizens should take other responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In the current day and age people tends to believe that paying
tax
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 to the
government
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 shows how accountable the person is toward society. While others believe that apart from cashing
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 via
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 it is necessary to help the country in non-monetary ways.
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 essay will give views on both sides to come to a conclusion. On one hand,
tax
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 is the major source of revenue for the
government
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. Ensuring to pay for it means helping the nation to be financially strong.
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, disputes of payment towards
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 income may cause turbulence in the country's finance.
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, the collected
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 amount will be equally distributed to society by other means. So, citizens of the country should ensure to pay all the
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 amounts to prove that they are socially responsible.
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, apart from ,
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 there are a lot of issues like environmental pollution in all forms needed to be reduced.
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, many people purchase vehicles running on fossil fuel which can be avoided
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 of buying vehicles using electricity help to save the environment doing
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 small action will
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 help the
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 to focus on some other major issues. In my opinion, people should hold responsible on both sides. Because lending money only is not mean that they are liable. But, they
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 need to put their own effort apart from the
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's effort to be socially responsible. Paying money as
tax
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 and disturbing other factors is not a valuable suggestion to be responsible.
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